商务英语(BEC)中级写作练习题(1)

商务英语(BEC)中级写作练习题(1) #

　　WRITING #

　　PART ONE #

　　You are the Managing Director of a company whose profits have recently

　　increased and you would like to reward staff for this. #

　　Write a memo to all staff:

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• 　　thanking them for their contribution
• 　　explaining why profits increased
• 　　telling them what their reward will be.

　　Write 40-50 words.

　　MEMO #

　　T0: All Staff

　　From:

　　Date: 7 December 2002

　　Subject: Staff Reward #

　　_____________________________________________________ #

　　_____________________________________________________ #

　　_____________________________________________________ #

　　_____________________________________________________ #

　　_____________________________________________________ #

　　Samples: #

　　Sample A #

　　To: All Staff

　　From: Managing Director #

　　Date: 7 December

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　　Subject: Staff reward

　　I would like to thank you for the contribution in increasing the company’s profit. The profit increased due to very hard work and long working hours. Each of the staff will receive an envelope with a reward on Tuesday. The reward is a trip to Hawaii, and I hope that this will be the perfect reward. Enjoy!

　　Thank you #

　　Band 4

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　　All points are adequately covered and developed. There is an adequate range of language, though

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　　with some repetition. #

　　Sample B #

　　To: All Staff

　　From: Paul Blake #

　　Date: 7 December 2002

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　　Subject: Staff reward

　　I am very pleased to tell everybody that our company was make a great profit in this year.

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　　Thank a lot everybody’s contribution for the company. Due to work hard, the management decided that every body would get the opportunity to add the salary and paid holiday. #

　　Band 2

　　All the content points are addressed, although poor control of basic structures, e.g. ‘was make’, 'opportunity to add the salary’, obscure the message at times. #